And That Made All the Difference

And That Made All the Difference

A Poem by AmongSavages
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loosely based on truth

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And That Made All the Difference

The light in me,

He couldn’t see.

And that made all the difference.

 

His eyes met mine,

They didn’t shine.

And that made all the difference.

 

Our lips, they touched,

His cheeks didn’t flush.

And that made all the difference.

 

My heart in his hands,

He gave it back.

And that made all the difference.

© 2013 AmongSavages


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AmongSavages
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I enjoyed this, short, sweet with no excess, It gives the poem a bigger impact, well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

AmongSavages

9 Years Ago

Thank you ^^
Shannen Forrester

9 Years Ago

I like your other stuff as well keep going :)
x_stitches_x3

9 Years Ago

I agree completley amazing .

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Added on February 28, 2013
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Tags: poem, poetry, sad, rejected, depressed, love, romance

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