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A Poem by AmongSavages
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Just a random poem written by a very itchy hand.

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Angsty.

Emotional.

A ball of feelings

In a tightly squeezed chest.

 

Anxious.

Nervous.

Air struggling to travel

Up my constricted throat.

 

Waiting.

Contemplating.

While the world goes on,

I pause for you… 

© 2013 AmongSavages


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AmongSavages
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Not bad, very terse and rough, which is I think what you were going for. In that regard, well-done. Some of your imagery is a little played-out, but there's nothing necessarily wrong with that. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AmongSavages

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much !
Love it

Posted 9 Years Ago


AmongSavages

9 Years Ago

Thanks ^^

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Added on March 3, 2013
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Tags: poem, poetry, sad, rejected, depressed, love, romance, waiting, paused

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AmongSavages
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