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A Poem by Amy
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Don't judge people based off their actions. There is always a reason why people do the things they do.

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I am more than what you preceive
Do you know me and what I need?
No. You don't know.
You don't know whether or not I'm putting on a show
You don't know how your comments stay in my head
Those comments make me want to not live but die instead.
Your comments don't hurt me ok,
But because I have anxiety in my head they stay
All your stupid comments build up like a tower.
If they go any higher then I will surely lose my will and power
I have deppression and you make it worse
YOU DON'T KNOW ME! But that doesn't matter to you of course
It never mattered.
All that has ever mattered to girls is to judge the people who look tattered.
I am more than just a face.
Unlike those idiotic girls I can learn at a faster pace
Why do all the girls at my school hate me?
I don't talk to you so leave me be
Sorry I don't sleep with guys every night
I'm sorry I don't have the biggest Bust on sight.
Don't judge a person you don't know.
Some lives aren't as beautiful as a bow,
Comments can kill.
I wouldn't be here if I didn't have a strong will
I just thought the world should know an important lesson.
Don't judge people because you might make their self-worth lessen.

© 2018 Amy


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Exceptional share and great read Amy. about how people judge and think they understand and know you. When really they don't they perceive.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Mental cruelty born from the ignorance of others not accepting diversity is an abuse that should not be tolerated! Your poetic reflections highlights a theme that needs open discussion - and - I would encourage anyone found being treated this way should tell or confide in a trustworthy friend/person of authority; be they teacher, parent or social/legal agency - a great and brave share - :-)

Posted 5 Years Ago


Amy

5 Years Ago

Thank you!

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