Red On A Rose

He loves me....he loves me not...... know me.

 

 

 

Your love breathes into my ear of true desire

The smell of your energy excites my inner being

I do not know your name but want more

 

Like red on a rose, the veins contract when excited

The blood flows profusely through out my body

Thus from the excitement of your touch

 

Though my eyes are windows to my soul

 To see inside would be a privilege for you

You could view only to take my breath away

 

To climax would be art created by me

Sculptured by my hands you will pulsate

Yet in the last minute I push you away

 

I can not allow my soul to fall

I can not hurt you anymore

You will remember me

 

Like red on a rose.

 

Reviews

[Enigma]

Oh! So romantic...so intense...so....WOW!!!
I loved it!! From the beginning to the end.Full of love-sweet-love. And the comparisions are cleverly made.It's a surprise that the woman pushes herself away from her love in the end, but it's more interestingf that way...
Well Done!!!

[Stephanie Marie<3]

Wow. This is amazing. It's so descriptive and gives me a vivid image in my mind with every line you've written. Very well-written.