Two Suns

Two Suns

A Poem by Amy..... "sing To Me A Spanish Lullaby, And I Will Get Lost In Your Eyes"
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"I walked into the morning mist..... I opened my eyes and found two suns... You and I.

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Brilliant, morning sky 

wakes my sleepy

eyes

 

Pastel blue clouds

covered in sharp

color of reds

 

Inhaling deeply

I feel the presence

of your soul

 

Take my spirit

and smile for

the day

 

Cover my life

with endless

sunsets

 

Together we

see life’s

beauty

 

Sunrise.....

Sunset.....

-Two Suns-

© 2008 Amy..... "sing To Me A Spanish Lullaby, And I Will Get Lost In Your Eyes"


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.......two suns and two worlds are common among people not blinded by their own selfishness.....I admit that it also took me a while to see both.

nice poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


Amy,

The imagery is crisp and clear and the emotions evocative. Nice work.

Jeanie

Posted 11 Years Ago


This is a truly lovely piece. So much love expressed here....

"Inhaling deeply
I feel the presence
of your soul

Take my spirit
and smile for
the day"

Beautiful!!



Posted 11 Years Ago


this has a grace to it. Like a psalm or a song. Beautiful poetry.

Posted 11 Years Ago


this is an awesome write with really great imagery. i like it a lot.

Posted 11 Years Ago


I can feel the fresh breeze of the air as I read through your poem.. Love it. Keep it up! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Amy..... "sing To Me A Spanish Lullaby, And I Will Get Lost In Your Eyes"
Amy..... "sing To Me A Spanish Lullaby, And I Will Get Lost In Your Eyes"

Bright souls have no certain destination and the moon got lost last night



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