Three Princess'

In a field of rainbows

three Princess' will play

The sun is slowly rising

as night turns into day

Beautiful flowers adorn their shinning hair

the sweet scent of innocence drifting through the air.

Rosy lips are smiling

eyes as bright as stars

They dance and sing through the field

where all the flowers are

they make little crowns from paper mache hearts

Oh, these tiny angels, how beautiful they are. 

Forever may they stay this way

Forever in my heart. 

Reviews

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAutho..]

Very nice, Riley. To capture a moment of soulful balance through the imagery of certain words, connected in ways that are meaningful; that is essence of writing. Who are we to say that there are too many flowers or too few stars or that bright eyes and rosy lips are the equal to the sweet scent of innocence? Angels, crowns, paper mache hearts - the delights of childhood, shared with that eternal, enduring prayer and the honesty of an open heart. Someone, somewhere smiles, reliving distant memories. Well done, Riley of the misty woods. :o)

[Acer]

Beautiful

[Acer]

Beautiful

[Chris]

I liked the subject and the way you began and the way the rhythm grew... then a few stumbles - the rhythm broke, the feel within seemed to pause... then return at the end.

Seems you cared and then got lost or distracted ...but you came back.

[PurpleQuartz]

Such a beautiful poem! I haven't read one so sweet in ages : )

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh if innocence could last forever imagine how blissful the world would be.
Lovely writing.

[x]

I really like it :)

[Ed Fagan]

As a guy I am not sure if I should admit that I like this poem. But, just between me and you, I think it's sweet and innocent. I hope you'll always keep them vibrant and carefree ... Lord knows we need as many wholesome feelings as we can get.