Her Death

Her Death

A Poem by Andrea Vargas

She wanders only to wonder,

if her tears will sprout flowers,

as she takes each step,

but never contains an ounce of power,

as her tears fall of acid,

and her weeping shudders her heart,

she struggles to breath,

as death shoots one powerful dart,

catching her limb by limb,

as she sways with the wind,

only to fall,

as her sight slowly dims,

and leaves with a whispher of powerful sins

© 2011 Andrea Vargas


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Andrea Vargas
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Nice play with words....very well written.

Posted 8 Years Ago


this is great and it touched my soul........ amazing....... ^^,


~*~Des Tiny~*~

Posted 8 Years Ago


This a very good poem.. I love the soft approach you took in the beginning.~"She wanders only to wonder, if her tears wil sprout flowers, as she takes each step"...it starts to pick up the tempo in the middle... then, ends with a whisper. Nice write!


Posted 8 Years Ago


Perfectly voiced and written, quirky and brilliantly punned, well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


This was amazing.
♥ Ta'Shandra

Posted 8 Years Ago


oh. my. darned. goodness!!
that was absolutely amazing. i loved it. i really did. amazing, but not only tht, heart wrenching----- no! soul touching! :) keep writing, sweet girl. i love you.

Posted 8 Years Ago


this was so great :)


Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on August 17, 2011
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Andrea Vargas
Andrea Vargas

Ontario, CA



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I have been apart of this site for awhile and have written of romance and pain and many other different genres.. and i have come across many fantastic poets. Poetry has taught me so much, it has h.. more..

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