Creeper

He travels with the whispher of the wind,

 

living in the corners of are eyes,

 

controlling the world,

 

 what lives and dies,

 

he breathes down your neck,

 

he travels up your spine,

 

he whisphers with the wind,

 

as he challenges the words you've sin'd,

 

he travels between both worlds,

 

dragging the unforgivable souls,

 

thrusting them into his ever buring coal,

 

He is waiting for your unforgivable soul.

 

Reviews

[Shayla Sayer]

holy s**t!
sorry, but this was just amazingly vivid!! my favorite line was "dragging the unforgivable souls,"..... amazing hun. i loved it. a lil repetative towards the end, thought i'd mention it, although if thats what your going for, lemme tell you-- it works!!

[Crow]

I sense an old friend from the darkness we all ultimately live, it has many names but ultimately one end result...the grand finale of life.

Well done!

[stars are far]

This was so amazing :)