Forever in your Arms

I wrote this for my special guy(: <3

Falling in a trance,

when presented with you,

A blessing of a chance,

I long to pursue,

And forever in your arms I wish to stay,

A whisper of sincerity,

Of a neverending day,

Just a lifetime of love,

Nestled together we lay,

And forever in your arms,

I wish to stay..

Reviews

[Enigma]

Adorable poem. Short and so incredibly sweet. Loved it.

[Desmund Tiny]

So sweet... so romantic...... the love is poured in this lines and it flows smoothly...Great write...... ^^,


~DeS~


^^,

[Sakib]

Very romantic. I liked the flow of the poem. Nicely expressed. Well done.

[stars are far]

This was so romantic :)
Great work :)

[joshua deathdealer]

Nice. I like the rhythm and flow here..xx