Dreams

Artwork by: Dorian Contras

My soul Enlightens me with visions
While my heart Pounds to feel your kiss
My body Aching to touch your skin
My mind Pursuing me - Don't dismiss
The signs

I start Counting down the hours
Wrapped in the Warmth of my Deep Sleep
Vivid dreams that will Fulfill Me
Despair keeping me Incomplete
Without you

I hear your Voice call my Name
Blood runs Ferociously through my Veins
A bound up Vessel I've become
And so Impossible to Contain
I Scream

Author's Note

Please review for me.. Is the punctuation correct, or better to keep all lower case..?
Thank you. Xo :)

Reviews

[Bear]

You sentences structure is great and your descriptive ability is very powerful, your topic is relatable so you have done everything right and you end up with a work of literature that is a pleasure to read, thank you.

[A. Fiorillo]

Thanks Bear!!! :)

[Samer Al-Abed]

I'm not even surprised how good this is anymore lol good job ;)

[A. Fiorillo]

Awww.... Lol..Thank you Samer. :)

[Emily]

I love the meaning!
Well done!

[A. Fiorillo]

Thanks Hun! :)