Is This It?

Is this it?
Of my fun.
Is it time for me to grow up?
Or the end of my personality?
Do I have be confused?
Or be focused on something serious.
Do I have to end my dancing?
Or end my poetry?
Why does my hands shake?
Am I worried for nothing or afraid something bad might happen to my life?
What if that someone in my life leave me?
I don't want anyone to leave my life.
Why do I ask myself questions?
I don't even know.
I don't really know who I really am?
I don't like when other people getting bullied.
I don't want people try to sacrifice their life's.
I would sacrifice my life then theirs.

Author's Note

hope everyone likes it

Reviews

[Addi]

This is another great poem. You have some really important stuff to say, good job! :) :)

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thank you and I'm trying to stop bulling and thanks =]

[Addi]

any time :)

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

:)

[blegh]

aww i love it :)

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thank you :)

[Darkening Shadow]

Loved it! Your writing has real truth! Great Write!

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thanks :)

[Kitten]

This is so powerful. And don't ever stop being who yew are. And if yew don't want to see people hurt. Be there for them.

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thanks and I will always

[Kitten]

Welcome and good.

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

:) and :D

[Kitten]

Hehe.

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

Tee-Hee

[Kitten]

:D

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

:D

[Kitten]

xD

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

lolz

[Kitten]

Haha.

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

:P

[Coyote Poetry]

Don't grow up too quickly. Work some. Travel a lot. I told you before. Travel, test life and have some fun. We will work for 50 years. Don't be in a rush to become old. A lot of good questions in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thanks :)

[Aly]

I liked this. Only thing I noticed was: Why does my hands shake?
I thought in my head that it should be: "Why do my hands shake"

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thank you and true

[Aly]

:) welcome! Continue to write! Pratice makes absolute perfect!

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

true this :)