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A Poem by Angel Bird
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Haiku 2

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       - Why destroy all this?

       - Did you not see the beauty?

       - Pure grace of flowers? 

      

© 2011 Angel Bird


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Angel
Reading this for exactly what is being said
makes perfect sense
in light of a once paradise
turned corporation:truly money- greedy desire ect
Changing what was once a beautiful planet
But people such as the author in this writing
project the postive perspective
with inspirational effect
Thanks

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Another beautiful poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Some people are blind to the flowers and natural beauty of the land and only see the money that can be made by destroying it...wonderful poem!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Ry
I think that this is on the right track, but that the last line confuses the reader a bit. Is the poem about flowers?
Great job, though!
Haikus are tricky!
-Eli

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Another fine one by you. Splendid work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel,
This is a lovely haiku, thanks for entering in my contest. This expresses a question of why destroy natures true beauty. Personally I dont know but thats when reducing, recycling, and reusing comes in. Anyways great haiku, and good luck in my contest!
-Dana :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i really love this haiku. i love many haikus but this is a haiku i love

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a great haiku. Great use of questions. it made it all the more interesting for me

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The count is correct, as you told me.
And... I do not like picking flowers or a bouquet, for I know the flowers will die! Give me a living plant and I will nourish it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Angel
Reading this for exactly what is being said
makes perfect sense
in light of a once paradise
turned corporation:truly money- greedy desire ect
Changing what was once a beautiful planet
But people such as the author in this writing
project the postive perspective
with inspirational effect
Thanks

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the title of this writing
its mystique,
this has soul transcribed imagery
portrait glimpse
written in essence, thanks

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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