Get rid of it!!!

Get rid of it!!!

A Poem by Angel Bird

 

   - Rid of Greed

   - World is Freed

   - Now at Ease

   - World in Peace

© 2009 Angel Bird


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So succinct you could almost miss it. - I had to go back at read it again, as I started it expecting to be reading for longer : ) Yet it says all it needs to say, really needs no addition.

I also think that the use of the hyphens, and a good sized font, adds to the tone of the poem, and helps emphasize the simple, yet as someone else said powerful thoughts.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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concise. tovli

Posted 10 Years Ago


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So powerful in such few words
Straight and to the point.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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veryy powerful in just a few words! got your point across very clearly! nicely done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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But... I like treasure! Does greed apply if the gold I find is hidden in ancient places hidden from mankinds eyes?
But I like World peace too... So I guess I can share some of my treasure...that would be ok...*smiles*

Tara

Posted 11 Years Ago


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YIP...If only...sigh sigh.
Thanks
Babsie Bee x

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well that is a powerful statement in so few words... to the point... I am with you on that 100%

Posted 11 Years Ago


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