Her

A poem drawn directly from a connection that I have with another person. Poetry is powerful when it comes from the heart. Two hearts make it even better.

Her

By. The Angelic Starchild

 

All of me wants you

Nothing else, not even water

Grace me with a kiss, sustain me

Everything I feel about you? How can I say it?

Lily without the L

In together? there is no I, only we, us.

Can it be? Can I have this moment?

Stop, let me breathe

Trying to stay on my feet while I’m falling

Are you with me? We can fall together

Right beside me?

For even if I don’t survive the fall I am complete

In everything that I do in this life, I want you there

Remember that there can never be me without you

Ever.

Author's Note

As with anything that I will post on Writers Cafe, I am completely open to your reviews, comments, criticism, or any thoughts that you have as a whole.

Reviews

[Terry O'Leary]

Full of passion... nice write!!

[Angelic_Starchild]

Thank you for taking the time to write a review! I appreciate the positive feedback.

[Alisa Js]

Aloha,

Thank you for stopping by and for your deeply appreciated comments.

I love this one.

The mystical, magical feeling of being in love, especially new love is almost too exquisite for words, yet you have captured it beautifully.

Alisa 💫

[Angelic_Starchild]

Hey there,

Thanks for taking the time to read my work. I really appreciate it. I can't say that I thought much about this one, I really let my emotions take control and I liked it. I look forward to reading more of poems as well.

ASC