Really wonderful, I could feel every beat of rhythm through every word that you have described. It is a wonderful piece and I appreciate the flow of your writing. Keep it up dear friend...
music is the melody of the soul carrying those emotions in waves of rhythm and beat.. at least in my opinion.. it uplifts.. it soothes.. it releases.. this has a lovely tone and flow to it that is just as pleasant to the mind.. has a nice spiritual layer as well. nicely done..
Poetry is expression. You create guidelines for human thought with every line you put down, anyone who reads it will interpret something totally different and that's why I enjoy writing. more..