The Edge

The Edge

A Poem by AngeloRosell

The edge lays cushioned 

Wet ocean sand

Between your toes

Swallow the air

Dive head first

A push from god

Penetrate the still

A child is reborn 

© 2014 AngeloRosell


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Sounds like a baptism...
with the way this read in the lines...
I could be wrong...
be has the theme...
of being cleanse again and anew...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AngeloRosell

11 Years Ago

you understand my friend ! Thank you !
Glen Yumang Manese

11 Years Ago

you're welcome...

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Added on February 28, 2014
Last Updated on February 28, 2014
Tags: Poem, Life, Love, Hope, Faith

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AngeloRosell
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Poetry is expression. You create guidelines for human thought with every line you put down, anyone who reads it will interpret something totally different and that's why I enjoy writing. more..

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