My odessey

Life

The wind blows without a destination

swaying, swaying, as I wander

The end of this journey no one knows

drawing tomorrow that's a merge

Everyone has tears in their heart, seeking their lost days

Rain, on a darken window - I want to fly over and beyond this dead city

Angel heart, so many hurts, KISS ME SUNLIGHT

Fall to dark, set soul free, HOLD ME MOONLIGHT

My dreams from childhood are still buried in a rubble

waiting for the moment to awaken and set out on their journey

My rumbled mind shall leads to the end

Along in the dark, stars raining down

gazing upon a dream of escape

The future, a prayer, the present - pull close to the sky, I want to fly high

Fantasia, tempesta, it's my odyssey

Go higher and wonder my heart of labyrint

 

Author's Note

I'm not the greatest speller or poem writer out there and will accept critises.

Reviews

[darkgurl]

This is a very beautiful write here, I enjoyed this, wonderfully written.

[KristaK]

This poem is truely beautiful. I enjoyed reading it. While you may not think you are much of a poet, you seemed to capture a mood very well here, describing it in feelings unseen. I liked it, thank you for writing it. =)

[Tiffany]

Well i'm not one too critize sooo, I really like the first sentance. Its hard to describe wind besides air, but the way u put it is very nice. Great Job!