I was not beautiful...

To my husband...

 

I was not beautiful until you..

until your eyes saw me as an angel.

Until your hands , painted me with such care , then I became a work of art.

I was not loved until you .. I was a puzzle that you completed

I was complicated and yet you did not give up.

I was scattered and torn until you glued me back together..

I did not know love until you became love to me.

I had not been seen , until you saw me.

I had not been known until you knew me.

Your love has been wings on which I can rise above any negative thought I have of who I am.

Your love is not doubted or contradiction.

I am forever beautiful because of your eyes,

 

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

this is gorgeous and to me shows that love can make most anything and one better..
these lines i really like :

I was not loved until you .. I was a puzzle that you completed

I was complicated and yet you did not give up.

I was scattered and torn until you glued me back together..

I always feel as if i am a jig-saw puzzle with a piece missing..

Love poems are my favorite. This is beautiful.


Chloe

[Jim Walters]

very nice Naomi...........good thoughts...good flow......nice and easy read...........

[Magdelena]

Oh this was wonderful!!! I so love poems that i can feel. Taste, be, this piece I was able to feel and be all.. What a thrill it was to go inside this and take piece by piece and feel all!!

Fantastic read...


Mag xx

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Thats so beautiful :) Yossi

[Emily B]

this is gorgeous . . . I've felt those words many times :)

[F. Nazarov]

I love this piece because it really reinforces the idea
of how other people can make us feel. Some people can
really turn your life around and help you see beauty in yourself
and everything else. People can make or break us and this piece
was a beautiful depiction of a relationship that can really bring out
the best in someone.