Multicolored rain

Multicolored rain

A Poem by Naomi Montana Walsh
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about seeing all the colors of your life

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There is blue and grey in everything I say,
Red blood inside purple veins ,silver tears I have cried, been green with envy down deep inside, I've been the spectrum from saturation to pale,felt the colors between heaven and hell.

All was beauty despite the pain,I am multicolored rain.

The day the night .the wrong the right.
the pleasure the pain,pouring rain.

the Anger the hope, the junkie on dope.
the lonely and the loved, sane and insane,
I'll be your multicolored rain.
The dry the wet , the silent, the loud,
the pending moment  of the rupturing cloud.

© 2009 Naomi Montana Walsh


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Great title, great ending and great in between.
(I've been the spectrum from saturation to pale,
felt the colors between heaven and hell.)
is one of my favs.. Been there, done that..
Thanks for sharing.
GBU

Posted 14 Years Ago


very nice

Posted 14 Years Ago


Great write! I love how deep you went with your own self description. Very very well done!

Posted 14 Years Ago


What a way to describe the depth of character you have... a very creative way of thinking and expressing yourself. LOVE IT!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Joe
That was creative to make the text multicolored, as the poem is called, "Multicolored rain." Good job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wonderful work. I love the textures within the poetry as well as your presentation. Very well done. Cheers.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is fantastic. Great flow and the images are beautiful. I also very much like the way you used color in your font as an underscore. Well done.

"I've been the spectrum from saturation to pale, felt the colors between heaven and hell." Brilliant.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Naomi Montana Walsh
Naomi Montana Walsh

Los Angeles , CA



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I am a writer and Artist .. well actually those are the same thing to me..I like to tell stories with art and I like to make pictures with words ..I live a happy life now but have walked through the v.. more..

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