Remember me

Some song lyrics from my 'Round Midnight series. It's sung a Capella until the last three stanzas.

Remember me?

I remember your touch

not given enough.

You twisted my soul in your fingers

on me your stain lingers

Do you remember my name,

if not, it's just the same

but I can't forget yours,

Those endless hours by the phone,

hoped to God we weren't done.

Remember me?

I remember your touch

not given enough.

You twisted my soul in your fingers

on me your stain lingers

You built black rainbows

with your petty sorrows,

you shut me out.

It's not worth remembering 

you made me your plaything.

Remember me?

I remember your touch

not given enough.

Those endless hours by the phone,

hoped to God we weren't done.

I hope you've forgotten.

It means one of us has.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A emotional ride in the poem dear Anne.
"Remember me?
I remember your touch
not given enough."
The above lines. I wondered often in my life. Us, who love to write. We keep places and old faces alive with our words. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Anne Martin]

This was another that just came. I was writing an episode of my series, and it just happened.

To be completely honest, they all do that. Think quick, write fast, before you forget it.

Cheers, Coyote

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree. Take notes and write ASAP. I always carry a journal. A story or poem find me in strange places. Cheers, Anne.

[Anne Martin]

I had a dream the night before last which was supposed to make it into today's episode of 'Round Midnight, but I forgot it. I think I actually wrote something better. It's not posted here, though. (Nobody was reading them on the WC.)

[Coyote Poetry]

I keep writing. You know, like myself. People may read but few will comment. I keep writing, hoping to get better. I have loved your work for many years dear Anne.

[Anne Martin]

Blushes....

[Bruce Bray]

A great way with words.
I love the visuals connecting with the actual emotion part of this.

[Anne Martin]

Thanks, Bruce.

[Bruce Bray]

You are welcome..
You have an amazing vocabulary..
Keep writing, stay driven