Tolerable Pain

I am so sick,

Of feeling sick...

My happiness,

Has sailed off on a very different ship...

There's an abyss I didn't know existed,

How could I not see - oh, how he persisted,

He could not have resisted...

But not a day goes by,

That I don't wish he had told me the reason why...

Why he should leave me behind,

With all of our memories wasted -

[not meant, again, for either to find]

I wonder if I could go back,

Would I be able to withstand the kiss -

[that kiss is still in tact]  - as a matter of fact...

I need to let you go for always and for true,

But what exactly is it, that I'm supposed to do...

I thought the storm would have been enough,

But her message must have been just a little rough...

Considering the fact that you are still quite silent,

It's safe to say that storm was becoming violent...

Reviews

[The Mad Prophet]

Very deep. I like how your happeness is focused, and yet multiple description.