Gentle Entity

OK, so this is an interesting poem that I created. It's an acrostic, but it's something else. The syllables go 1-2-3-4-5-6-5-4-3-2-1, yet I'm not sure whether these poems have a name or not. Oh well, I hope you enjoy.

Gentle Entity

God
Extends
Night’s calm veil.
Time seems to stop,
Letting you cradle
Eve, the abused puppy.
Now you feel the urge
To care for her.
It cuddles,
Thanking
You

 

Author's Note

I hope you enjoy.

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

I did i liked it
tATE

[Kierstin]

I think it may be a Etheree? Im not sure... Either way the wording is very precise, its very nice. I don't care for the colors used too much though, i think it kind of takes away from the actual words..?