A Lover's Kiss

A Lover's Kiss

A Poem by AAmell
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In dedication to my Wife

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What could you call a warm embrace,

That wouldn’t be complete disgrace?

A simple hug would surely fail

To fully lift this subtle veil.


Curling toes upon a bed

Or gentle pecks upon your head,

Are more than diction can describe;

This rival to divine design.


An ecstasy of hearts and limbs

Like softly singing ancient hymns,

Can no more be solidified

Than Romeo’s own spirit guide.


What I say to thee is this:

If all the earth was free of bliss

And edging on that dark abyss;

Outside our door the world amiss,

Reprieve would be a lover’s kiss

© 2016 AAmell


Author's Note

AAmell
Written for my College Poetry class, October 2016

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This was a really beautiful love poem! Did you ever let your wife read it? It was so well put together! I really loved the last two stanzas the best.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, I've never looked at it that way before. I like that thought. I love how this seems strictly written (like you know what you're doing, unlike me) and carefully constructed. This made me smile, it was very intriguing. It was over to soon for me!

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on October 21, 2016
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Tags: love, power of love, kiss, poetry, poem about love, poem

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AAmell
AAmell

YUCAIPA, CA



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I'm 25 years old, have been married for over 1 year now, have a 2 year old son, am going to school full time for English: Linguistics, and work full time as the sole source of income for my family at .. more..

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