Demons Serenade Haiku

Haiku about when dark thoughts take over.

Demons serenade

my heart into a deep sleep

no numbered lambs jump

 

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Author's Note

Trying to improve my writing ability to a professional level.

Reviews

[fallen_sueanne]

Please don't be mad at me, but I don't think you're on a professional level yet. I do like this haiku though; partly because I can see what you're saying but also because most people who write haikus always write with happy thoughts. Like I said, I like this and good job