Good bye

After a long I am sharing something... hope you like it

I have said enough,

I have done enough,

I have felt enough,

I have cried enough,

Now is the time to set you free,

To go where you wanted to be,

You are not slave of my thoughts,

You are not a bird in the cage,

But if my feelings are true you will comeback,

May be we will meet again,

When our minds are clear,

When our heart is pure,

When your anger pacifies,

When the storm in the soul stops,

I will wait for you my love,

Till then I will continue to feel the pain,

But will hide it smartly behind my smile,

And wait for you to arrive as wholly mine,

Till then goodbye my love.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Love never comes when we want. It seem one person is running and one person to loving.
"And wait for you to arrive as wholly mine,
Till then goodbye my love."
Sometime we can wait and sometime we find a better place and person. Thank you Anurag for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[CA Anurag Sharma]

rightly said Sir.. :) thanks for the kind review :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.

[Willard Wells]

Well, done piece as the heart speaks of what it wants and needs. But don't forget to know when to cut your losses and move on. Some goodbyes are forever.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much Sir...one needs to take whatever is in stride :)

[Prabha Salimath]

It's a brilliant piece of writing I liked it. It shows pain and patience together. You said to feel the pain until you get back that again. Nicely penned.

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much for the kind words :)

[Ehra Khan]

This is lovely. A lot of people can relate to this . The angst, loneliness, sorrow...all of it. Great write

[CA Anurag Sharma]

Thank you so much for the kind words :)