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I sat still and gazed at it,
it felt like trees passing through a car,
dragging towards the sun or the star.

Now it has struck on a road,
providing the possibility to look outdoor,
some found the smiling trees,
some found the barren land.

Author's Note

Do suggest a good title

Reviews

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When I read it into my head pop up hollowing possibilities .I don't know if is any good but that's what I feel about this poem.

[Anvi Kaushik]

Can you elaborate

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I don't think I can. My way of thinking it's very irrational . I just feel your composition brought so many dreamy symbols.

[Anvi Kaushik]

👍ok thanks for reviewing