Secret Truth

inspired by my timeless lover

 

My diary is found

Beneath the ageless Oak

I weep not for you

Arrogance is a fool!

He broods in icy white

 

My shadow makes love

to another...

 

A dance unrehearsed

Shy secrets

Yearnings remain safely
Concealed deep in lines of

My hand as modesty seduces

 

We were lovers centuries ago

Old and new...

Forever...

Care for...

Respect

Admire

 

Love penetrates boundaries

 

A Healing touch

Explosive

Pure like moon water

Transforms shattered glass

Covets burning flesh

 

Kiss

Caress

Consume

Undress

 

He is the man I see
When I open my eyes...

 

 

 

Reviews

[Lalli]

wow!!!

EXPLOSIVLY POWERFUL... the way you personified arrogance, modesty, shadow, and love... *snap snap

apollonia, i gotta say 1 thing. This is my favorite poem i've ever read from you!
from the beginning word to the final syllable, this is a TRUE masterpiece.
One of the most unique ways i've read or seen to protray the desire for ones lover.

much love n respect

-Lalli

[The Mad Prophet]

Very mysterious, I like the tone of this poem. Very well done. It was expressed in a, uniquely drawn too sort of way. It grabs you and take you to a place left at an oak tree. Story within a story, nice.

[A LaDy NaMeD D]

I can't explain it...but you have a way with words. I had so many emotions going through me at once when i read this. *and it's in my favorite color* which was kind of a little bonus on my part. I enjoyed reading this my friend.

Danni

[Reeses]

"We were lovers centuries ago Old and new...Forever...Care for...Respect
Admire
Love penetrates boundaries"
This was great. Gave me chills up and down my spine. Your writing hypnotizes me. So hypnotic and deadly lyke a silent explosive. I shall sleep well and calm after reading this work of art. It makes me feel comforting. Great write! Gudnite! ~Reeses~

[Dani California]

"I weep not for you
Arrogance is a fool!
He broods in icy white
My shadow makes love
to another... "

This is just perfect,
and its message... clear.

Another outstanding piece A ...
Bravo girl!!!

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

wow, is that a picture of you right there? (compliment)

very beautiful, again. i like the way you write, the fluidity, the sensuality, the enjoyment of the piece itself. this is another one that delights.

thanks for sharing.

kena

[Marie]

Wow. Wonderful imagery.

[Legion]

My shadow makes love to another - that is an awesome line.

Like the whole poem and your choice of pics to go with it. Well written.