Innocence Stolen

Innocence Stolen

A Poem by TamiViolet
"

when your ex wants you back, but you just can't

"

 

 

I realize the damage is

Irrevocable...

Heart in turmoil...

Blood coagulated

Memories

 

Disrupt tortured mind...

Let me go!

You burned our bed

With Indifference

Apologies become mute...

 

Buried

Innocence lost in satiated

Paradise

Never to be regained

I am truly Weary...

 

Shameful...

Ungrateful...

Thieves and Liars

Reek of disease

Yellow wraps its cloak

 

Around Regret

Unrelenting

Why weren't you there
When I needed you?

Why did I allow you...

 

To Spare me the Time?

 

 

© 2008 TamiViolet


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WOW an excellent outlet of the emotion released unto the poem. Indeed I can feel the anger,hurt,and weariness very vividly as a painting within my mind. The scars can be felt on the soul ..and their strength
to express them outwardly.The process has manifested unto the written expression another form of healing


B.B.
Lasla

Posted 15 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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a wonderful slight on a beat up redemption......thank you...sorry for the absence

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"I realize the damage is
Irrevocable...
Heart in turmoil...
Blood coagulated
Memories"

A very strong beginning, the kind that slaps one in the face. I can feel the emotions of anger, despair; all of the above one feel when looking back on a painful memory. I think emotional writes are good because they are uninhibited and start the process of healing. Even in your rawest form you write eloquently.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow such power in the explanation of "Get The Hell Out Of Here". I love the impactful message of this piece. "You burned our bed With Indifference". That made me stand up and give you an ovation. Okay here is a confession. I am a fan! Great write!



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is definitely emotions released, and writing is a wonderful way to vent. Nice write.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderfully written, powerfully felt. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow fricken wow. 1st your titles catch my attention, then its lyke a rollercoaster of emotions. . . till we make it to the climax and BURST!!! Then there is understanding and the ride is over and I. . . the reader, wants to ride once again. ~Reeses~

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree with everyone else wow!!!!! this is a powerful piece and the imagery is excellent in this.... nice job...

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, just about leaves me searching for words, apollonia,
this is tremendously subtle in effect, and when the full vision surfaces,
one can really feel the heartbreak, Painfully conceptualized,
brilliantly written, the force in flow swept me away.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

That is VERY good. I like poems like that. It's when the words come out like tears or pain, is when it is EXTREMELY well written. Yours is ABSOLUTELY, 150% that. :D

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You know what, honestly ... specially after reading our description, why in the hell does he think that there is any chance of getting together. Sorry sweetie but me myself is trying to brake free from some destructiveness in my life.... and once I am gone there would never be turning back, so I am hoping with you it would be the same

Great poem!!!! You have no idea how close it hit to home at the moment

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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