best friends

best friends

A Poem by TamiViolet
"

Dedicated to Dani California

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Come with me to the oldest lighthouse on Erie Harbor, and view the sunset
amidst a raspberry lemon sky.

Share with me your secrets as our tanned legs dangle over the wooden
pier, and our polished toes flirt, splashing in the golden water while we
share a bottle of deep red wine.


We both know the truth and taste each other's pain without inhibitions ~

 

without boundaries...

 

You understand how much we both detest...

 

black

and

white

borders.

 

As I view your jade eyes and gently remove a strand of soft brown hair
from your precious face, I realize that we belong with...

 

the water...

 

the sand...

 

the wind...

 

And I kiss away the tears from your past...

 

 

 

© 2011 TamiViolet


Author's Note

TamiViolet
I wrote this one a while ago. However, Dani has become one of my dearest friends on the cafe, and each time I read it, I think of her. This is about pure, unconditional friendship.

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Just a lovely moment beautifully expressed with pulses of imagination that literally colour the page. You have a very visual intensity about you which perhaps mirrors you own perceptions and certainly gives vividity to your expressions...if that don't sound too poncy! But damn it it's true! It's also great to see the contrast between your jagged pieces. And there is a reality about the piece, which acknowleges that life causes tears. But the moment is a beautiful one. Enjoyed the read.

Posted 12 Years Ago


7 of 7 people found this review constructive.




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captured a moment..serene..and touching..this is so emotive..and beautifully expressed ..friendship like this is priceless

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

:) simple and pure... a wonderful expression on unconditional love...and bond of friendship!


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Come with me to the oldest lighthouse on Erie Harbor, and view the sunset
amidst a raspberry lemon sky.

Share with me your secrets as our tanned legs dangle over the wooden
pier, and our polished toes flirt, splashing in the golden water while we
share a bottle of deep red wine.

Beautiful ! like you and Dani.. love it still.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So many good expressions...to have a friendship this close one must cherish it...they are so few...

nice work...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very touching tribute to your friend. It is clear that you care about her deeply. You know the small pleasures that take both of you away from past experiences and bring great happiness. That knowledge and openness is the mark of a true friend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It was a pleasure to read this again... and to see the strand of soft brown hair... and to feel the warm moist kisses...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I revisited this one! It carries with it such a profound joy and deep sense of what friendships are truly about... The colors create a beautiful, soft feeling that moves through the words, bringing alive the imagery. Oh, this was a wonderful, lifting write! Thank you for sharing!



Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful dear heart! I love reading the emotion in your writing. You do such a good job. :) The colors in the piece are stunning as well. Thank you for sharing!!!

xxoxx

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lovely deployment of the fruit, the water, the colours, the elements... and beautiful kisses... Perfect love, two beautiful people rejoicing in their union of hearts and minds and bodies...

A gorgeous tribute..

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You're so sweet to write such a tribute/dedication to a dear
friend that I'm sure gave her a big smile and warmth in her heart.

Well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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