Gifts of Magic

Senryu

 

 

 

 

Frolic in the field

Ride the ebony horses

Unveil what is real

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Oh!!! :O :O
What a beautiful 5-7-5!
I didn't even realized it was a Haiku before reading the description..
Your words are so vivid and deep. It's surely very hard to deliver so much mature sense and depth in words when one needs to write in restricted syllabus counts.
Beautiful! simply beautiful piece!
I will surely add it to my favorites!

[Dani California]

Ahhhhh... perfect. Not too many can deliver that much depth in so few syllables. You're one of few my dear. "Unveil what is real"...

where true freedom lives.

I love that you're sharing structured forms! We can have fun with this when and if you're up for it. I'll send you a challenge as well... a tanka maybe? :-D

Beautful work, A.

p.s. and awesome graphic you chose. Wow.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Simply beautiful... our spirit is a great gift and it must be free to roam ;-)

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A very lovely poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Ralphy]

This is an impressive write. How did you do that so craftly. The image is so beautiful, as the wing horse approaches. Everytime I look at the image and read the words I see something else. Wonderful write...
it could also be a Collaboration with the picture...