Stay

when a loved one is suicidal, one might turn to writing.

Stay.

Please don't go.

I love you so much,

Do you even know?

The restless nights,

The countless tears,

All shed for you.

You bring so much light

Into this dull life.

You bring so much hope,

When I think there is none.

I know you want to go,

But I can't bear the thought of you leaving.

Stay.

Reviews

[Mister T.]

Wonderful piece of writing. Saying goodbye to or let go of people you love is one of the most difficult things in life. This type of writing could really help depressed people or anyone who thinks they serve no purpose in this world. Keep on the good work!

[Anneli Jo]

Thank you so much, that is extremely kind of you to say that! And I agree, I think small reminders like this can be quite important for people with depression.

[Prantik Ali]

Wonderful!
Loved reading this one.
I wish I could write poems like this! :) :)

[Anneli Jo]

Wow, thank you! And the best poems that I've found myself writing are the ones that are written from deep down in my heart. If you write your truest feelings, they often show and are quite amazing!

[Prantik Ali]

I'll keep that in mind :)
Thanks for the tip! :)

[Prantik Ali]

I'll keep that in mind :)
Thanks for the tip! :)

[Prantik Ali]

I'll keep that in mind :)
Thanks for the tip! :)

[Prantik Ali]

I'll keep that in mind :)
Thanks for the tip! :)

[Prantik Ali]

I'll keep that in mind :)
Thanks for the tip! :)

[Anneli Jo]

You're welcome!

[Ammar Ali]

This is exactly how i felt for someone. It brought back those memories in my mind.
This is actually a very good piece of work. Looking forward for some more :-)
Thumbs up . Keep writing ^…^

[Anneli Jo]

Thanks so much! I will. :)

[ShelliPH]

I remember this one. Heartfelt and true.

[Anneli Jo]

Thank you. Love you.

[Grey Evanescent]

An inspiring piece... you should write more of these and shove it to the face of those people who thinks no one loves them and think they should commit suicide. (it's not like I wasn't once one of them. But I realized along the way that there are still so much beautiful things in this world to see and love. And still many people out there who can love you.)

Good work~! ^_^

[Anneli Jo]

I agree! I think it's very important to send out constant reminders to those contemplating suicide that they are so loved and needed in this world.

[Anneli Jo]

Also, thanks so much for the feedback, I appreciate it!

[Grey Evanescent]

you're welcome :D

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Yes, people wanting to commit suicide is a very sad thing, this is a good poem to express your love for them. Did you show them the poem?

[Anneli Jo]

Thank you! And I actually haven't, I probably should.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

^^ You're welcome! Yes people need to hear how much you care for them :)

[Anneli Jo]

You're right, I'll do that soon, thank you. :)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

^^ You're very welcome! (: