A Prayer..

A Prayer..

A Poem by Arabdha

Bowed is my head..
folded my arms..
my world has no sorrow..
it inflicts no pain either..
mine is a sacrosanctum of happiness and melody..
but its lost somewhere in the sea of human misery..
and therefore my soul embraces this simple prayer..
that of humanity..

© 2011 Arabdha


Author's Note

Arabdha
thank you Abhijit..the suggestion for the use of 'melody' was his..the original word was 'glee'..

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The poem is very nice and the concept is well expressed , the only thing I can point out (though I may be wrong) is that I am not sure whether glee is the appropriate term here . If you are not using that exact word here for any particular reason , you might consider replacing it with some synonym .
Once again , a very nice read .

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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nice prayer..i liked it..
we can use this prayer...
nice work:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A beautiful poem that's as important in the troubled times we live in...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful depth released in your words. A very nice poem. I enjoyed...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so beautiful...soft and just lovely....

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

simple and deep... just the way that feels so great... optimism still overpowers the rest in this... great write...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is lovely, Myrah. Simple and spiritual and peaceful, with just a touch of melancholy, but still hopeful. Nicely done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is a beautiful prayer. I love the simple peace that filters through it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the contrast in this poem. It is a great prayer.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The poem is very nice and the concept is well expressed , the only thing I can point out (though I may be wrong) is that I am not sure whether glee is the appropriate term here . If you are not using that exact word here for any particular reason , you might consider replacing it with some synonym .
Once again , a very nice read .

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 31, 2011
Last Updated on February 5, 2011
Tags: prayer, peace, happiness, humbleness, life, world, humanity

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Arabdha
Arabdha

Bangalore, Karnataka, India



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i am 23..a thinker and a dreamer..life is hard..and i'm just fumbling my way through it..writing is my constant companion and escape.. I write likeAgatha ChristieI Write Like by Mémoires,.. more..

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