Love @ First Sight

Love is an unquantifiable emotion that can only be felt.

Love @ First Sight

An unfamiliar place; tears welled in my beady eyes

*Look at that poor thing*, laughed those tough guys

A total stranger; she knew I was in trouble

Placed her hand over mine and she did mumble

*Everything is going to be alright*

And I knew that it was love @ first sight!

We didn’t have a common tongue

And hey! I was charming and young.

Every time when I fatally fall,

She would pick me up and help me to stand tall.

She is the QUEEN who turned this Puny Pawn into a Mighty Knight!

Friendship; I have never felt it to be this amusing before

I have never met any trust-worthy person like her before

It all started that magical day when she told “Everything is going to be alright”

And even SHE knew that it was love @ first sight!

Sometimes we argue a lot; yes! a lot!

But then God throws a brick at us and "BOOM" every issue gets sorted out

Because this angel’s sole purpose in life is to love.

All these thoughts flash in my mind

As she proves  *love is blind*

And I am proud to call this homosapien, this particular homosapien, my MOM.

- Aravind 

Author's Note

The poem starts off with six lines per para and gradually decreases by one line in the subsequent paragraphs.

Reviews

[Raj Sahu]

It is your only poem on the site till now and is catchy indeed. Love the description and bonding between you and mother.
Thank you.
Congratulations.

[Aravind]

Thank You!

[Russell Pennwright]

Great poem. Unique style and easy to read. Have you considered songwriting?

[Aravind]

Thank You Mr Russell :) I haven't considered song writing yet. Perhaps in future I might!

[Dinesh Kumar]

good write
Beautiful.....

[Aravind]

Thanks :-D

[Dinesh Kumar]

mention not

[NEHA]

hey aravind, you gotta good taste of poetries!
I loved the ending...you really penned the truth...though rarely visible nowadays
...every mom is an angel as well as a first love too!!!!!!!
:p

[Aravind]

Thank You Neha :)