Traveller

To go even further beyond,
I was told to tap within,
Search beneath flaws and fears that haunt,
If I got lost to not give in,
Not give up the strength I want.

A traveller with tempered hide,
With harder guts that bind,
With the layers that make up his ride,
He delves for a route to find.

Going even further beyond,
Do you see yourself pristine,
Floating on a fresh crystal pond,
With the sticky mud washed clean,
A short still before crossing on.

Reviews

[John the Baptist]

To go beyond, tap within. Excellent advice. It's the best way to get "the sticky mud" off.

[Archishman Rick]

Your eview much appreciated :) I'm glad to hear your thoughts.

[Archishman Rick]

*review I mean

[Poetic Beauty]

I’ll my favorite stanza is the last with its crystal clear pond and being washed clean. Beautiful thought penned there.

[Archishman Rick]

I'm delighted to hear that :) Much appreciation for your thoughts.

[Chris Shaw]

A wonderful poem of strength for anyone to contemplate when the chips are down. To look inside for inner resolve and move that mountain.forward. Don't give up.

Chris

[Archishman Rick]

Thank you truly for your wonderful comments Ms. Chris. Cheers and all good wishes to you.

[Chris Shaw]

And all the best and good wishes to you too. Have a great day :)

[Archishman Rick]

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