You Will Never Love Me

You Will Never Love Me

A Poem by Areeba
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The agony of realizing something as cruel as this is very...agonizing.

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You Will Never Love Me

 

Always knew it was coming,

Just didn't know it'd be so soon,

You're gone from my life, maybe forever,

Like the star have suddenly deserted the moon.

 

I think I read too many books,

Of charming princes and happy endings,

Should have thought to read the others too,

Of cruel betrayals and sullen pretendings.

 

It hurts inside but I can't imagine,

A life without your twinkling eyes,

It's hard to think you're gone for good,

Like you and I have severed ties.

 

You will never love me,

And I'll never get over this,

That you will never love me,

And it's you I'll forever miss.

© 2013 Areeba


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I can't imagine the hurt you feel when your betrayed of cruelly from a lover and a friend
to you this game should never end this was for keeps now it incomplete your hurting all over
and I can't begin to release your pain don't fall for fairy tales endings they never come true
The marriage crisis rate it high and divorce is on the rise Some day Some day you will see you're better off
Than you would of been if he stayed in your life.

Posted 7 Years Ago


it hurts inside but i cant imagine a life without your twinkling eyes.......thoes are the lines i connected with ... the reality of being hurt by someone yet loving them still .......beautiful poem about such a sad situation

Posted 8 Years Ago


The second stanza is my favorite! Instead of the reality of relationships, girls hear a lot about Prince Charming! So true!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like the emotion put in it i can feel the pain within your words. In parts of it i could definitely see the emotions put into it. Overall nice work.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Areeba

8 Years Ago

Thanks
I love how sad this is
I know how you feel.
Its okay things gets better in time.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Areeba

8 Years Ago

Thanks!
this is very very nice,so beautiful. I can feel the emotion flowing in this poem. Very well done :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Areeba

8 Years Ago

Thanks!!!
nice "like a star you've suddenly deserted the moon" but, may want to reread the last line with the "And it's you'll forever miss" but, other than that well done, really it just sounds wonderful.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Loved it all the times you love someone more than they love you. Happened to me it was beautifully put.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Areeba

8 Years Ago

Aww, thanks!
And I hope you have a happily ever after with the one you love!
It broke my heart. So beautiful and true

Posted 8 Years Ago


Areeba

8 Years Ago

Thanks!!!
Areeba

8 Years Ago

Thanks!!!
so sad.... :( I like it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Areeba

8 Years Ago

Thanks!!!

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Added on February 11, 2013
Last Updated on April 19, 2013
Tags: love, never, agony, anger, sad, me, pretendings, always, coming, soon, life, gone, deserted, stars, moon, books, happy ending, charming prince, cruel, betrayals, sullen, hurt, imagine, world, miss

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Areeba
Areeba

Lahore, Islam, Pakistan



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I am a fun crazy GIRL(yup, I'm a female!) who loves to write, read, draw and rollerskate!!! Also, I happen to be in love with Vegeta of Dragon Ball Z!!!!! And foods of all kinds!!! Oh, and probably.. more..

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