Hue
A Poem by
Arena
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Heard in the voice of this silence
Felt in the breeze through its cadence
Smelt in the first rain, wet soil's fragrance
Here you exist, somewhere in your absence.
Cropping into my dormant thought
As a melody soothing parched throat
Drizzling over this desert's long drought
Here you persist, in the clouds you brought.
Voice?
Breeze?
Drizzle?
or is it you?
My mind is not thinking of you
In my thoughts you dribble through
My hand is not writing anymore
In my words you scribble through
My heart is not beating itself too
With each sound you nibble through
Thoughts
Beats
they are not for you
neither do they have your hue
rather they are nothing apart from you !
© 2011 Arena
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Beautiful I really liked it loved the structure and the flow great job
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Simply awesome in every way.. I like the style, the font colors and the message:) x
Posted 12 Years Ago
Simply awesome in every way.. I like the style, the font colors and the message:) x
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
flowed perfect as a cool nights breeze really enjoyed this one and the skill with which you write akes me regret not reading you sooner anyways cheers my friend Gonzo
Posted 12 Years Ago
flowed perfect as a cool nights breeze really enjoyed this one and the skill with which you write akes me regret not reading you sooner anyways cheers my friend Gonzo
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
nice structure and great use of single word sentences.
Posted 12 Years Ago
nice structure and great use of single word sentences.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
A very nice way to describe the happiness of having someone near.
"Voice?
Breeze?
Drizzle?
or is it you?"
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote
Posted 12 Years Ago
A very nice way to describe the happiness of having someone near.
"Voice?
Breeze?
Drizzle?
or is it you?"
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Beautiful I really liked it loved the structure and the flow great job
Posted 12 Years Ago
Beautiful I really liked it loved the structure and the flow great job
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.