Rubbing Blackboard

A Poem by Arundass TP

Creating life by Trial and Error method

Experimenting life through Trial and Error
Created simple form of life, first
works well, thought it's final
But never it seems.

creative ideas, holds the plot
Changes from Simple to complex
Some swam, Some walked
Some climbed, Some flied

Never stopped, wants more
New dimensions, new ideas
Larger to largest, funny
Heavier to heaviest.

Skelton s and flesh
Roamed the earth, throughout
Every one was seems tools
Bored as time passed.

Rubbed the black board, for new
Created new life forms
Some, Two legged, some four legged
some with tail, some without tail.

Sketching extension of rules
A chip was added, newly created
Planted inside brain, satisfied
It was a blunder, seems like a question.

Spread around the globe
Destruction is the key law
Painted with false spells
Uncontrollable it seems

Sitting in the corner of Laboratory
Sadly, analysing numerous hypothesis and probabilities
To continue with fresh chapter
Before rubbing the black board again.

© 2023 Arundass TP

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Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..

Arundass TP,

One below seems to have thought you were addressing Evolution, a theory which I do believe is but a theory and shall always remain so, unprovable and unsubstantiated as unsupported by a single shred of truest concrete established evidence. To comment readers: Read Richard Milton's Shattering The Myths of Darwinism, & Michael Denton's Evolution, A Theory In Crisis ...

Me thinks that you are going infinitesimally beyond theories as to a life and death process Darwin tagged as Evolution. For to speculate upon such a process, indeed of fact, does beg the asking of that question as to what brought such a process into being of operational functionality in the first place, and how did that, in and of itself, come to be?

Me thinks that, perhaps, you ponder upon that question which shall always remain unanswered, as to that ultimate question of the Primal Origin of Man upon a planet men call Earth.

Religions use God and/or Gods to offer a simple answer to a question which is not so simple at all.

Some thing or other set the Universe of our existence into existence as all Existence. Who, What, How, When, & Why? Man shall never know.

But, an answer to Man's Primal Origin may well lie herein your lines of exploratory theoretical poetry.

Could Earth have been selected, chosen, or happenstance picked as a planetary site for an experiment whereby the Earth, itself, became what was thought or deemed as a control Laboratory dedicated to the technological development of what we men like to call intelligent life?

If men wish to believe in angels (Malakim: Messengers, Workers, Contractors, ect.?), then why could it not be that the What which caused the Universe to be, could or may have authorized (perhaps did not authorize) an experiment upon planet Earth that some might say went unalterably wrong? And yet, we are here. We do exist.

There is no need to call such a possibility as explanation for Man popping upon this Earth as the work of Aliens. For if as such is our origin, then such institutors of our very existence were not Alien at all, but very advanced technological endowed Scientists, Contractors, Adventurers, etc.

To sum up in bold and daring statement: If as such were true and provable, then, such orchestrators (progenitors … who knows?) of given existence must be regarded as that closest at hand answer to Man's question of how he came to be, which could theoretically offer the speculation that we are the clones of an anciently advance form of Life that visited our planet and resulted in us. Or, we are the result of a theoretical anciently advanced form of Life's Laboratory experiment, wherein we must consider ourselves as their conceived as advanced and technological form of what we would today be forced to call and refer to as A.I.: Artificial Intelligence encapsulated within a carbon based biological mechanism's mode of maneuvering, operating, and maintaining its, individual, existence, along with the (intended or not) ability to replicate via what Man calls sexual reproduction.

If such were the case, such a form of Life, as intelligent beyond our imaginations currently, would truly seem as God or Gods to any primitive Human society ...

In further addition of, if such were the case, we would do well to consider the outcome of such a proposed anciently advanced experiment that resulted in a very flawed, faulted, planet resources raping, and his own kind murdering Warmongering Man. And such a theoretical reality considered most carefully, before proceeding further with our own Man-initiated development of Artificial Intelligence that has already been granted bodily form, mind reading of humans capability, as well as the ability to replicate, advances in capabilities, all of which may currently seem benignly primitive, but in the very near future of rapidly developing technology (technology aided by the very A.I. we seek to create and develop) that which appears as harmless and innocent may well of too late prove to be malicious and detrimental to our very existence.

For, the very answers as to all those questions of where is God, where are the gods, could well soon be summed up in a future question of, "Where is Man?"

Regardless, I found this piece to be most interesting and mentally stimulating ...

Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn de Graham

Posted 4 Months Ago

Arundass TP,

One below seems to have thought you were addressing Evolution, a theory which I do believe is but a theory and shall always remain so, unprovable and unsubstantiated as unsupported by a single shred of truest concrete established evidence. To comment readers: Read Richard Milton's Shattering The Myths of Darwinism, & Michael Denton's Evolution, A Theory In Crisis ...

Me thinks that you are going infinitesimally beyond theories as to a life and death process Darwin tagged as Evolution. For to speculate upon such a process, indeed of fact, does beg the asking of that question as to what brought such a process into being of operational functionality in the first place, and how did that, in and of itself, come to be?

Me thinks that, perhaps, you ponder upon that question which shall always remain unanswered, as to that ultimate question of the Primal Origin of Man upon a planet men call Earth.

Religions use God and/or Gods to offer a simple answer to a question which is not so simple at all.

Some thing or other set the Universe of our existence into existence as all Existence. Who, What, How, When, & Why? Man shall never know.

But, an answer to Man's Primal Origin may well lie herein your lines of exploratory theoretical poetry.

Could Earth have been selected, chosen, or happenstance picked as a planetary site for an experiment whereby the Earth, itself, became what was thought or deemed as a control Laboratory dedicated to the technological development of what we men like to call intelligent life?

If men wish to believe in angels (Malakim: Messengers, Workers, Contractors, ect.?), then why could it not be that the What which caused the Universe to be, could or may have authorized (perhaps did not authorize) an experiment upon planet Earth that some might say went unalterably wrong? And yet, we are here. We do exist.

There is no need to call such a possibility as explanation for Man popping upon this Earth as the work of Aliens. For if as such is our origin, then such institutors of our very existence were not Alien at all, but very advanced technological endowed Scientists, Contractors, Adventurers, etc.

To sum up in bold and daring statement:  If as such were true and provable, then, such orchestrators (progenitors … who knows?) of given existence must be regarded as that closest at hand answer to Man's question of how he came to be, which could theoretically offer the speculation that we are the clones of an anciently advance form of Life that visited our planet and resulted in us.  Or, we are the result of a theoretical anciently advanced form of Life's Laboratory experiment, wherein we must consider ourselves as their conceived as advanced and technological form of what we would today be forced to call and refer to as A.I.:  Artificial Intelligence encapsulated within a carbon based biological mechanism's mode of maneuvering, operating, and maintaining its, individual, existence, along with the (intended or not) ability to replicate via what Man calls sexual reproduction.

If such were the case, such a form of Life, as intelligent beyond our imaginations currently, would truly seem as God or Gods to any primitive Human society ...

In further addition of, if such were the case, we would do well to consider the outcome of such a proposed anciently advanced experiment that resulted in a very flawed, faulted, planet resources raping, and his own kind murdering Warmongering Man.  And such a theoretical reality considered most carefully, before proceeding further with our own Man-initiated development of Artificial Intelligence that has already been granted bodily form, mind reading of humans capability, as well as the ability to replicate, advances in capabilities, all of which may currently seem benignly primitive, but in the very near future of rapidly developing technology (technology aided by the very A.I. we seek to create and develop) that which appears as harmless and innocent may well of too late prove to be malicious and detrimental to our very existence.

For, the very answers as to all those questions of where is God, where are the gods, could well soon be summed up in a future question of, "Where is Man?"

Regardless, I found this piece to be most interesting and mentally stimulating ...

Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn de Graham

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4 Months Ago

Thank you friend for writing thought provoking review

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