Vivid memories

Vivid memories

A Poem by Arundass TP
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Sometimes memories haunts

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Before the sun is on
Windows are well opened
To see the owls widened eyes
From the near by woods.

Expecting call of wood owls
Stand still, as the clock ticks advances
Memories flipped the pages
Marking pages with colorful inks.

Darkness was a story of past
The rulers of the night are forbidden
Never heard the music of night
Just those screeching sounds stay as memories.

© 2023 Arundass TP


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Oh how their screams etch their presence into our minds. Whipped away in the maddening sound. Great write.

With love,

Matthew

Posted 1 Year Ago


Arundass TP

1 Year Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Nice Work, well thought out and put together. Excellent ✨️✨️✨️✨️✨️

Posted 1 Year Ago


Arundass TP

1 Year Ago

Thank you friend for reading 😊
Nicely expressed piece, loved the flow of words ;-}

Posted 1 Year Ago


Arundass TP

1 Year Ago

Thank you friend for reading 😊
I like this. The first line, "before the sun is on" paused me. But that's really what is going on, all these memories in the dark, or darkness in the memories. Lovely to read someone new. Thank you!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Arundass TP

1 Year Ago

Thank you friend 😊


for the time being, I don't need such memories, I am surrounded by the haunting and hunting sounds made by these wonderful masters of night sky each night .. I find their presence reassuring .. maybe one day, if I should move from my little oasis of green they will become treasured memories .. I am glad I found myself here .. Neville


Posted 1 Year Ago


Arundass TP

1 Year Ago

Thank you friend for reading.
A well crafted poem with
Vivid imagery in well chosen words
within the lines ..

Posted 1 Year Ago


Arundass TP

1 Year Ago

Thank you friend 😊
I recently moved to a farm and have a huge white owl living In A tree. They are amazing. Great poem

Posted 1 Year Ago


Arundass TP

1 Year Ago

Thank you friend 😊
Absolutely love that opening line. I read this one several times trying to find a rhythm that would match the feeling and just like mine, well, sometimes you have to go with what is there and listen to the screeching...what waits for us in darkness is not always what you want the windows wide open to, but praise for knowing your woods. And just so long as it isn't the "whipperwill"..lol. That is one creature that'll drive you insane! Enjoyed it~

Posted 1 Year Ago


Arundass TP

1 Year Ago

Thank you friend 😊
I loved the lyrical quality of your lovely phases, and your imagery. Very nice!

Posted 1 Year Ago


Arundass TP

1 Year Ago

Thank you friend 😊
I heard the hoot of the night owl here. I have always found that reassuring. This poem is visually beautiful, as well as haunting. Lovely poem Arundass.

Chris

Posted 1 Year Ago


Arundass TP

1 Year Ago

Thank you friend 😊 sure, Owls are majestic birds.

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Added on October 12, 2023
Last Updated on October 12, 2023
Tags: Nature, Owls, Poetry, memories

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Arundass TP
Arundass TP

Thalassery, Kerala, India



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