Inside the locked door

Rusty and dusty

When the old transforms older
Older transforms to oldest
The brightest moon seems dusty
The brightest and strongest metal seems rusty.

Call it's rusty, it's muddy
It's matured but never clear and virgin
Vulture's are waiting ringing the bell
To see the oldest, to welcome maturity.

Hyaena's follows vulture's
Maggots, flies and flees follow hyaenas
The oldest sit's indoor, cultivated
Locking the door intact.

Vultures have brilliant eyes
Matured more than the rusty beam
Burn's the door into ashes
Wishes the oldest good luck.
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Reviews

[andrew mitchell]

During time life is given and taken away in nature’s recycling. Nice work.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Starbaby]

The circle of life. In some cultures, the elderly are revered. In some, they are disposable. Always, the weakest are food for those higher up on the food chain. Well penned, and I thank you for sharing.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend

[Neville]

what goes around comes around .. just for the record, I was once almost hit on the head by a vulture that must have died on the wing .. and then on my way back .. the dogs had had their fill .. well penned my friend .. Neville

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[DIVYA]

There is so much food for thought here. An interesting depiction of the circle of life, dear Arun. Enjoyed a lot.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[AJNJ]

A very smart and well written poem. Good work.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Writergurl]

This is amazing, I really enjoyed this write. Very nicely written

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[zainul]

Love your nice poem.It is certainly a thought provoking piece.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Neville]

you are most welcome ..

[1809 Black Plague Decem..]

Dearest, Arundass TP, I love it!
The moon rusty,
The brilliant eyes
the imagery of the maggots and hyenas, and so delicious
then the door locked, it gives me an insight to what I see an illusion and then the door, great write, Dear,
-----Maynard

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend

[1809 Black Plague December]

most Welcome, Dear. :P