Sent to Hell

Sent to Hell

A Poem by Morgan Ashire
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This is lyric for my old band, Godsendeath. Could also be interchanged with "Supernatural/Occult," or "Religious."

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-Cast into the seething lake of fire

to rot for perpetuity.

Pain has no limit, nor does hope solidify.

Welcome to eternal damnation.-

 

Denied by the gods for eternal salvation,

The carcass of my soul starts decomposition.

Time has passed for absolution.

Merge with sinners for castigation.

 

Requisite the slaughter.

Beaten to submission.

 

Imprisoned. Diluted. Consordid. Distorted.

Imprisoned. Diluted. Distorted. Sent to Hell.

 

-Condemned to burn in the endless fire.

Insolence gets nothing gained.

What's once lost, is lost forever.

Realize there's nothing the same.-

 

-You see what has become of us?-

 

Barred from heaven,

Cursed by hatred,

Society of the damned.

 

Left to die.

Left to burn.

Left to rot.

Nothing left.

© 2009 Morgan Ashire


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-Cast into the seething lake of fire

to rot for perpetuity.

Pain has no limit, nor does hope solidify.

Welcome to eternal damnation.-


Ooh, painfully dark "welcome to eternal damnation" especially descriptive
of being "sent to hell" very hot, in the lake of fire,indeed,~An excellent and well crafted
piece ~ Superb Pen~Thanks for sharing in Ice and Fire~

Fran Marie







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Posted 14 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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I don't know if i can give you a review like you want but i will at least let you know what i thought. Your description is great in this peice and i could feel the fires of hell surronding me as i read on. It sent chills down my spine. I like your style of witing. Who says poems have to be happy? I prefer them this way. Tortured souls wrought forever in the flames of hades...a concept i am far too fond of. I am no poet but i like this. You strike fear into my heart and almost make me want to get up and say a prayer. Great job on this, i will be sure to return soon to read more!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very insightful piece about how you, yourself see Hell. I have never really thought about it too much in depth because most of the time I think we create our own Hells in our minds. But this is a very strong and descriptive piece. I like it.

"What's once lost, is lost forever.
Realize there's nothing the same."

Ahh I love it. haha.
Thanks for sharing.
Can't wait to hear your band!


Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Morgan Ashire
Morgan Ashire

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