The Winter

Winter always remains special for me in my life as it reminds me about her... I have shared some of memoris...Hope you all like it :)

The winter has come,

Again the flowers will blossom,

Short will be the days and Long the nights will become,

Again the time has come,

To sleep like a kid without any reason,

 

Again the winter has come and brought lots of memories,

Which I had with you,

Again I want to live them now,

But how? Don’t have any clue.

 

How can I forget that Saturday?

For the first time you had talked with me,

And asked me a question,

That how the problem would be solved and from where to begin?

 

How can I forget that Christmas night?

When you had offered me a crispy Chocolate ice cream bite,

And how can I forget those months of November and December

When a cute angel was coming to class with a pink sweater in foggy winter weather.

 

Some nights of winter will be too cold,

Some nights of winter will be dark and bold,

In some midnight of winter,

I will miss u and feel alone,

And then again my heart will say to me,

That one day winter will go and there will be start of a new Dawn.

 

No matter how many winters come and go,

No matter how much I feel cold,

The fog of winter never can cover you in my life,

And no matter what the weather may cast

Baby.. I truly Love you and will wait for you,

Till my name becomes a Past…

Author's Note

All type of suggestions are welcomed as I want to develop my writing...

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

I have read this one many times... And now, once again...
i like the way you write...
the way you put words into rhymes..
the way you work with emotions...
and I like the way u are...
and reading ur works with that music seems to be a habit... whenever I read ur works, I put on that music particularly...
i love ur writings...
keep writing...
Ani...

[Ashish]

Thank you so muchhhh... :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

You're welcome 🍎🐻

[Bella Luna]

I really love the nostalgia you captured here. The details were so perfect. Very distinct memories and it's obvious how significant each memory is. Great job!

[Ashish]

Ya, those memories were more than memories..

Thank you Bella :)

[Michael X]

if you have just started writing,, you have talent, keep on writing! This poem is a mix of sentiment and lost love. great formula!

[Ashish]

That's a big word for me Michael...
Yes, I have just started.
I will try to improve my writing more and more :)

Honestly I have started writing just to get rid from love matter, but by all of your encouragement, I think I should continue it now :)

Thanks for reviewing

[tanmay7551]

This one here is like a Hot iron discovered from Ice.
Parallels!
Love during Winter or Love and Winter! Either way choice of words and expression is very good.

Keep writing!

[Ashish]

Whoop! That's a big complement
Thank you :)

[Swati Nayak]

A very warm poem for freezing winters...
this line was awesome
The fog of winter never can cover you in my life,

And no matter what the weather may cast

Baby.. I truly Love you and will wait for you,

Till my name becomes a Past…
Bahuut Bhala............

[Ashish]

Thank you so much..
I always feel happy when someone feel the exact feeling which I felt by my poem

[Swati Nayak]

well your poems are one of a kind .the feeling are so gentle vibrant subtle yet they leave a relaxing effect on the reader.

[Ashish]

I will try something different in my next poem..

[Jack Necron (Aubrey Jac..]

Written with strong tones of nostalgia and longing, this is a touching memory. I like the comparison of missing someone or a love lost to a dreary winter; it evokes the overall emotion nicely. Thank you for sharing.

[Ashish]

Ya! Those memories..whenever I think , I get lost in a world where there are only two people .. I & She..
Thank you for reading and reviewing Jack :)

[Jack Necron (Aubrey Jack Peaslee)]

And that is often a great source for writing, and you are welcome!

[Ayushi Sharma]

awesomeeeeeeeee ashish!!!! well expressed d feelings of true lovers in winters....I like it...

[Ashish]

Thank you Ayushi..
That means a lot... :)

[Maddy Raye]

Wow this is amazing and sweet. It shows how much you care and love this girl. I love it. :)

[Ashish]

Thanks Maddy... :)

[Maddy Raye]

Your welcome :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

Wow..!!
This is so sweet...
Winter with love..... I always wished to be one....
so lovely poem and also a beautiful dedication to the one whom you like the most...
Last part is very nice... my favourite lines are the last four lines which brought me cold and fog both together...!!
Too nice to see love in the air....
God doesn't bless everyone with this, and as you have it, never lose...
I pray God to bless you and your relation forever......
No suggestions, cause I read it through my second vision i.e. through emotions... first vision is language...
Very nice Ashish. Keep writing and blooming...!!!

[Ashish]

I don't have it dear ... I just wish that may be someday i have that ...

[Anindita Janhabee]

You will... Don't worry...
if something is yours, it will definitely come back to u... if it doesn't come, then it was never yours.....
reality.... ok...

[Ashish]

Hmm..may be :)