Overflow

Explosion in Progress.

The words falling out of my mouth

Tumbling. 

I can’t concentrate.

    You tease me. 

        You please me.

The words continue to spew. 

You are undeniable.

You never cease to amaze me.

I want you.

I need you.

Overflowing my mind, body, and soul;

The truth must be heard.

I have to say it before I explode.

I say without regret. 

I love you. 

My mind starts to rest.

But not for very long.  

You never leave my head.

I think about you always.

But now you know how I feel. 

Reviews

[justice]

FORM!! Hey, I just want to thank you for being one of the few poets that I have read that truly considers form. I sure do not. I just really love when I read someone who does. This is beautifully written, constructed, and flowing. The words do the action. It is almost onomatopoeia in and of itself. Tank you for sharing it. :)

[Nothing Personal]

Its something which could be made into a song. Good job!

[Anicca]

A very lovely piece of writing. I loved the form and every single word just seemed perfectly in place, wonderful flow. Well done.

[Luna]

I loved it, truthful, honest and from an experienced place or ear.

[DeevaMarx]

Dude! You definitely have a talent here! I love how you changed the font on the word 'tumbling.' Yes poetry is about the words but look how the font played a part in the imagery?!

Well done hun!

[deeps]

This is such a wonderful write here
so beautiful and well written.

[JENY]

A lovely poem…..
A very authentic expression of your feelings..
Loved it…
If the person you are referring to happens to read the poem…
He will fall deeper in love with you…
Again and and…
I promise…
That much beautiful…

[Vanna Renee]

Love. Lust. Deception.
You've acquired all of these beautifully

[klp4]

Your poems just keep getting better and better Ash. =)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the set-up and the flow of the poem. A sweet poem of love and tenderness. When someone gets in our head. We are in trouble. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Seerose]

Great! The shape fits very well. It makes the poem even more flowing. I love this poem. :)