A Poem by Asocial Sweetie

Just going through rough patches.


Teary eyes
Big world
What do you see?
Angry words
Shouting at me.

Close my eyes
Hidden world
What do I see?
Peaceful dreams
A world just for me.

© 2018 Asocial Sweetie

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Well, the good news is, it doesn't cost anything to post poems on the internet. The bad news is, this poem kinda sucks. It's cliche. Doesn't say anything new. A projection of antisocial negativity. Although it might be therapeutic to write this, people are wasting seconds of their life to read this.

I might as well start smoking if instead of reading work from this site.

The minutes taken off my life would be equal.

Posted 2 Years Ago

Feels like a fight, or a struggle to see the world not through the pangs of pain but beats of hope

Posted 2 Years Ago

This makes me see the world we are living in versus the world we are dreaming to live! Great write!

Posted 2 Years Ago

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3 Reviews
Added on April 13, 2018
Last Updated on April 13, 2018
Tags: Fear, Angry, Hidden, World, Depression, Sad, Poetry, Nightmares, Sleep, Dreams, Eyes


Asocial Sweetie
Asocial Sweetie

La Puente, CA

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