Hide

adding some parts of my story for now till i link them together so hopefully you guys enjoy it

HIDE 

Hide lands on vatorroz with a group of friends not so close the group landed in a cave also known as  the graveyard of the forgotten a ghoul infested

area and were attacked soon after landing Hide was the only one not in shock quickly noticing a sword near the corpse of a fallen soldier the body mostly eatten

a ghoul crawls out of a of the cave walls near hide coming at him, hide dashes for the sword he manages to pull out the sword in a turning motion swinging as the ghoul jumps at him the blade completely tearing through its neck chopping the head off covering hide in black blood.

hide runs towards to the group protecting them as they ran not knowing where they're going as the ghouls chase them they're numbers only increasing as the chase 

continues the group in fear,screaming,and crying but hide focusing only on taking out the nearest to the group 

the group finally finds a ladder they quickly start climbing not caring who goes first hide stays behind all of them protecting them as the ghouls keep coming 

after them out of every hole of the cave as the last one climbed up a ghoul jumps towards hide, hide manages to slash it's face and tackles it towards the group of 

ghouls shoving them back. Hide runs for the ladder as he sees it pulled up by john one of the group members  hide screams drop the f*****g ladder!!!

 john scared out of his mind screams back they won't stop till they get one of us!!! julia one of the group members screams drop the ladder they'll kill him!!!

as she runs for the ladder John punches her on the face knocking her out and carries her away leaving Hide's fate with the ghouls the group hears Hide's screams 

as the screams are over taken but the horrible screeches of the ghouls then nothing.

Author's Note

ignore grammar problem, and please give feedback (good and bad) i'll take any thank you

Reviews

[Mandures]

This is a good story, the horror of the ghouls makes it really interesting and looking forward to reading more, awesome job and keep up the good work! :D