Staring at Our Shoes

Staring at Our Shoes

A Poem by Hippy
"

its when i stared at my shoes and i thought of her which crosses my mind all the time

"

As I sit here

Staring at our shoes

I see one

Deep in the blue

Alone

The other up high

On a pillar

Towering toward the sky

One is the right

The other

Is the left

Separate

Nothing is solved

Together

All is resolved

Allowing us to walk

Together

On both our feet

Out into the blue

The beautiful sea

Where together

Forever

We shall be

Drifting together in harmony

For all eternity

© 2010 Hippy


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Hippy
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it reminds me of the shoegazing era of rock, you could put this to music and have a wonderful folk song on your hands. (ala dylan). keep on space truckin'.

Posted 9 Years Ago


what a great correlation between a pair of shoes and love as a partnership.

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is great, tow is better than one, the "shoes" are nothing with out each other.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Beautiful piece of writing. I like it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


We all write as we pleased.. so I will say it..
This is reality...pure, and a thing we all have done.. so
I like it.. and it's flawless but ....that is just me!

Posted 9 Years Ago


great job on this...your talent really shows through on this piece..awesome job on this!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


awwww so sweet =]
I really liked it :D
It flowed very nicely and I see some rhyming, made it flow even better in my opinion.

Posted 9 Years Ago


awesome expression. your flow was tight on point. wonderful talent as always

Posted 9 Years Ago


i like it. the understanding of how two totally different elements can come together and make one perfect compound!~

Posted 9 Years Ago


I think it's beautiful. To me, it speaks of soulmates. I'm adding it to my favorites.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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My names austin lee wallace i am a hippy and thats what they all call me. i love music its the greatest, i play guitar the harp piano flute violin and whatever i can get me hands on. Im not much of a .. more..

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