thanks for entry into my 5 lines and under with meaning comp
i love this
i believe the heart can rebuild with the right love support and faith
it may never be the same exactly still broken but beating on a stronger different drum
this makes me think of the bee gees song "how can u mend a broken heart"
well done thanks for entry into my 5 lines under comp
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
Thank you for your review & I was glad that I could enter it into your contest :)
Ah I beg to differ the heart rebuilds though the scars remain
Even the fissures, the small tears can cover a heart but still
It beats
Still it fights to keep
Beating
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