As my love slowly burns

As my love slowly burns

A Poem by AutumnRose
"

A love only lasts so long.. When it is gone it's gone

"

Through the summer, Through the spring.

My hearts still burns,like a fiery ring.
 

It scorches every thought of you.

at last a love that burns so true.
 

My love is burning like the sun.

Everday I bless fate for what was done.
 

I was born to love someone, and honestly I do.

But regardless of my answer I need one from you.
 

I can't live this way, always one step behind.

Following your trail of what you left for me to find.
 


On to this I say,That love is still with me to this day.

Whether you loved me or not, your no longer my only
thought.
 

In fact your neither my second nor my third.

Now thoughts of you just seem absurd.
 

I have found someone to love, and he loves me just the same.

A whirlwind of emotions that no one can tame.
 

When I think of him, I look forward to tomorrow.

Where as thoughts of you only ever brought me sorrow.
 

I hope you got what I was trying to say.

My love for you has softly burned away.


-Autumn Rose Inman
 

© 2008 AutumnRose


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I have come simply attached to this piece, for it's from the pain you felt and it's something we have all dealt with in the past.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Ummm... this is AWESOME!! I can relate to the first part of this, and the second part gives me hope for the future! lol
♥ily
Steph

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is really good. I think you could use a little "tightening" of the phrases, some have words that I think interrupt the flow. But it is great righting, and you make us feel your triumph over someone who wasn't worthy of you. Keep writing, no matter what! I'm looking forward to reading more from you.

Posted 15 Years Ago


i liked this poem and how it told a story of a person moving on with thier life to love someone new who actually oves them back. Great poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


This is truly moving.

"I can't live this way, always one step behind.

Following your trail of what you left for me to find."

Amazing lines, so full of emotion.


Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on July 17, 2008

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I take intrests in writing, drawing, singing, and I am just recently dipping into photography. I am pretty much a one woman travelling circus! On June 9, 2008 the death of my inspiration shook my worl.. more..

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