Find Wilderness

You want fame?
Find wilderness.

If everyone pays attention to you

then it is far away.

Saint Patrick

is a star to me.

Captured and brought to Ireland as

a child

he had a poor education.

Yet when he escaped

he went to school on an

island off the coast

of France, and asked to be

sent back to Ireland to convert

the people there

to Christianity.

It was around the year 500.

The Irish welcomed him back

and took his message to heart readily.

No one, in March

is more famous to me

than Saint Patrick.

Reviews

[Tim McGovern]

I sense the sarcasm in both the first two lines and the last verse.
Excellent piece
Thank you
Namaste'
Tim

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Nice poem.
But it seems more like a story.
It would be better as a story,
or a biography.
But you do have talent.