THE ATOMOSPHERE OF LIFE

This is another poem I wrote inspired from another hit movie I saw. Can guess what the picture is?

Life is like an atmosphere

It exists on two levels, 

And those levels is space and earth 

Space is the place 

The place of unlimited dreaming 

We can dream a bit of little plants 

Then our plants become trees

Trees of strength and courage 

Our dreams can grow strong with a level of courage 

Unlimited dreaming in space 

Then there is earth 

The place where humans come from 

Where human connections are made 

We tend to dream when are on earth 

Because that is where we came from 

We can make our dreams stronger 

But reality can hit us, 

With a solid brick of failure 

First, we try to make our dreams reality 

And, then our dreams are cut down, 

Along with ourselves 

When we are cut down, 

We feel useless and hopeless 

We tend to isolate ourselves, 

From others

Because we think no one cares about out cut-downed dreams 

So what keeps us going 

We attempt to try 

Try when there is nothing left to try 

Because trying is the energy source that keeps us going 

The Lord reminds us to do it 

Because he loves our cut-downed dreams as well 

So don't stop at what you are doing 

Continue to plant your dreams 

Fly into the atmosphere of the Holy Trinity

Live life like it's your own house 

Where you can relax and enjoy yourself

The Advice: Don't let go 

   

  

 

   

 

   

Author's Note

So what do you think of the message of the poem? Are the pictures dynamic enough to enforce the writing?

Reviews

[Deepika]

Wow! This was such a motivational write!
I liked the dimensions that you've added to life, the earth and the space! Things that seem vaguely possible on earth can be carried over to the space as dreams, realize them there, trace back to earth and vest the real efforts to transform those dreams into reality! Keep up:)

[Double T]

I am so glad you like my poem. It's so fun to get into writing. :)

[Jamestown]

Amen! Your work is awesome! This is wonderful in all aspects, the last stanza gave me
chills and it's 80 in Cali,thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Double T]

It's good that you like reading my poems Jamestown. We feel so collabertive when we review eachothers work. :)