Reflection

Something isn't right here

Is it this mirror?

Or is it my refection

The reflection of which holds pain and neglection

Imaginary scares turn into reality

Masked bye beauty this world is a tragedy                              

I can't bare to live 

I can't bare to breath 

I refuse to live in a world of which deceived

Scares grow

But know one must know

I can't keep living this lie 

Just let me cry

Please!

I just wanna Die!       

 

Reviews

[KaoticOrder]

Wow. Very honest and heartfelt. i'm sorry you feel this way. If you ever need to talk or vent, message me

[Bleeding Iris]

thank you so much I love to hear what you have to say about my poems. It means the world to me that I hold your support within my fingertips.

[KaoticOrder]

All some people need is some support that they aren't getting enough of, I'm one of those people as well. I know a lot of poets and writers have this feeling, and that's why they write. In hope someone will read them and hear what they're saying. Well, I hear you. And I'm here for you.

[GreenEyedPoet]

Just a suggestion but maybe change 'scares grow' to fears grow. I think it would read better with that being changed. Either way though, it's a good write. And I read your comment below, length doesn't matter when you're writing. Just let the words flow, you'll know when it's completed. :)

Also I'm sorry you are feeling this way, you're young though hun, you have your whole life ahead of you! And it might not matter to you, being that you don't believe in God but I'll pray for you that you don't continue to feel this way. If you ever need to talk, message me. I know how you feel, I've been there several times in my life.

[Bleeding Iris]

''scares grow'' is in its right place. It means i'm self harming more. But thank you for the suggestion and thank you for your support!

[GreenEyedPoet]

Ahh gotcha. Ignore my suggestion then! Haha.
I'm terribly sad to hear about the self harming though. :/

[Bleeding Iris]

Sorry my poems are always so short. I feel like i could have put a little more emotion or flare into this one. I will try harder in the future.